22A: Elevator Pitch No. 3
https://youtu.be/kNJEtaifyIk
2. The feedback that stood out to me as important was how I think the coffee shop would make money. I also like how positive people were on my 2nd pitch and how people said I improved from my first one. People said they really like how I grabbed their attention and how it related to them, so I kept this as my hook.
3. I spoke about how I think the coffee shop would be successful if people were made aware of the mission statement. I believe that this service would make a lot of money if people were made aware of it and how it would impact the community. I believe that I did not memorize the script, rather I tried to connect feelings to my opportunity to make it seem more real. I do believe that I am more comfortable because of the amount of times I have thought about this opportunity and I believe the pitch is better because of the connection I feel to my opportunity.
2. The feedback that stood out to me as important was how I think the coffee shop would make money. I also like how positive people were on my 2nd pitch and how people said I improved from my first one. People said they really like how I grabbed their attention and how it related to them, so I kept this as my hook.
3. I spoke about how I think the coffee shop would be successful if people were made aware of the mission statement. I believe that this service would make a lot of money if people were made aware of it and how it would impact the community. I believe that I did not memorize the script, rather I tried to connect feelings to my opportunity to make it seem more real. I do believe that I am more comfortable because of the amount of times I have thought about this opportunity and I believe the pitch is better because of the connection I feel to my opportunity.
Hi Logan, I enjoyed your hook because it got me thinking about what if I woke up one day and didn't have anything else to achieve. I love your idea of a coffee shop and think it could be successful. I mean who doesn't love coffee?! Overall your pitch was great and I thought you spoke slow and clear. I think that for your idea though you may need to add another person in your business.
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